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Sometimes

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Digital stars make neon scars in the night,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being alive,
and sometimes being in love.

Magazine dreams rip at the seams in the light,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being in love,
and sometimes being alive

Bright coloured cars start highway wars in plain sight,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being alive,
and sometimes being in love.

Tasting the sounds as the ocean pounds against moonlight,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being in love,
and sometimes being alive.
This poem was kind of written for Intricately-Ordinary because I read a critique she wrote where she said that she loved the word sometimes- and therefore it spawned this poem
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0hgravity's avatar
really nice rhythm to this. the poem feels like sometimes.