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Digital stars make neon scars in the night,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being alive,
and sometimes being in love.

Magazine dreams rip at the seams in the light,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being in love,
and sometimes being alive

Bright coloured cars start highway wars in plain sight,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being alive,
and sometimes being in love.

Tasting the sounds as the ocean pounds against moonlight,
and we are imagining the feeling of sometimes being in love,
and sometimes being alive.
This poem was kind of written for Intricately-Ordinary because I read a critique she wrote where she said that she loved the word sometimes- and therefore it spawned this poem
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0hgravity Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really nice rhythm to this. the poem feels like sometimes.
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PrideofPanem Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much :D
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0hgravity Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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Sammur-amat Nov 18, 2012   General Artist
Congratulations on the well-deserved DLD! :clap:
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PrideofPanem Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much :D
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Sammur-amat Nov 19, 2012   General Artist
You are so very welcome! :hug:
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PrideofPanem Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
My gratitude is as boundless as the sea! Thank you so much :D
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BelaRoseWolf Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
This is such an interesting piece! :D
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PrideofPanem Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you- and thank you for adding it to your collection :D
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